Higher and higher every step we took. Rails lifting us up to the top of the world. Peering out over the land. A picture is worth a thousand words but this one was a million.
" Are we there yet?" "Are we there yet?" Georgina moaned. Her eyes almost jumped out. Clear windows locking us in.
Billions of roofs were dots disappearing from the world.
Ears popping, cables jumping, echos copying. A sea of clouds lifting us to the top.
Ha, ha, ha a horrible cackle rang out from Georgina's mouth. Kelly was bright red with anger. Steam blowing out of her ears. "Stop that horrid cackle" she roared tremendously. "It's a habbit she'll never be able to stop" said Dad disappointedly.
A billion meters in the sky. Did I say this was a million words. I meant ten million.
cool story jade, I like the part where you put onomatepoieas and dialouge
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